Widow

C_R · September 22nd, 2009, 10:52 PM

In every window, the curtains are drawn.
In the home behind the windows, a widow she mourns.
In the widow's loneliness, bitter tears swell
She swallows them hard, like poison from a well.
A miserable youth, stands by her side.
A pocket of bravery, for he never cried.
A shaking hand, to offer affection.
A shaking head, a waving hand of rejection.
A look to the curtains, a look down again
Thoughts questioning the reason of pain.
This sorrow seeps through him
Though never attached.
He looks to the widow, with a look matched
Walking forward so slow, to the gaps of light.
To know that these actions are right.
Such a burden for the youth
To pull back the curtains and open the truth.
The light pulses through her eyes.
The tears once there, have now dried.
She looks to the youth, the sorrow subsiding.
As he stands in one window
Where the curtains are open.
She sees the sun, above.
Above the window.
And welcomes the transition with an air of charm.
Welcomes the youth back into her arms.

wino · September 22nd, 2009, 10:57 PM

deep, touching but now I feel burdoned, why?

C_R · September 22nd, 2009, 10:59 PM

I do not know..

Gogo · September 22nd, 2009, 11:12 PM

I enjoyed that CR, thanks....quite a scenario.
The drawn curtains resonates with me and perhaps you can relate as well.
Obviously you're very talented - artwork, poetry, what's next?

C_R · September 22nd, 2009, 11:14 PM

Prose

p4irs · September 23rd, 2009, 12:15 AM

are you a widow?

C_R · September 23rd, 2009, 12:19 AM

No I am not.

foofur · September 23rd, 2009, 08:44 AM

i like

ec_nana · September 23rd, 2009, 09:48 PM

Me too.

Sonya · September 26th, 2009, 10:41 PM

I like it too.

September 22nd, 2009, 10:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
C_R Rigor Mortis Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 2,757	Widow In every window, the curtains are drawn. In the home behind the windows, a widow she mourns. In the widow's loneliness, bitter tears swell She swallows them hard, like poison from a well. A miserable youth, stands by her side. A pocket of bravery, for he never cried. A shaking hand, to offer affection. A shaking head, a waving hand of rejection. A look to the curtains, a look down again Thoughts questioning the reason of pain. This sorrow seeps through him Though never attached. He looks to the widow, with a look matched Walking forward so slow, to the gaps of light. To know that these actions are right. Such a burden for the youth To pull back the curtains and open the truth. The light pulses through her eyes. The tears once there, have now dried. She looks to the youth, the sorrow subsiding. As he stands in one window Where the curtains are open. She sees the sun, above. Above the window. And welcomes the transition with an air of charm. Welcomes the youth back into her arms. __________________ Rod: Let’s get out of 'ere Bill, there’s six Stoke fans staring right at us. Bill: Right, which one's staring at me. Rod: The one with the burberry cap on. Please don't start Bill. Bill: Right see you you cunt, I'll cut you first. shit piss fuck cunt cocksucker motherfucker and tits.

September 22nd, 2009, 10:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
wino LOOKIN 4 TITUS CROW Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: near side of the outback Posts: 999	deep, touching but now I feel burdoned, why? __________________ "Whisky is a wonderful drink. It makes you see double and feel single"

September 22nd, 2009, 10:59 PM	#3 (permalink)
C_R Rigor Mortis Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 2,757	I do not know.. __________________ Rod: Let’s get out of 'ere Bill, there’s six Stoke fans staring right at us. Bill: Right, which one's staring at me. Rod: The one with the burberry cap on. Please don't start Bill. Bill: Right see you you cunt, I'll cut you first. shit piss fuck cunt cocksucker motherfucker and tits.

September 22nd, 2009, 11:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
Gogo Psycho Moderator Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: detox Posts: 1,319	I enjoyed that CR, thanks....quite a scenario. The drawn curtains resonates with me and perhaps you can relate as well. Obviously you're very talented - artwork, poetry, what's next? __________________ blood blood gimme blood - bloody bloody bloody - bloody blood

September 22nd, 2009, 11:14 PM	#5 (permalink)
C_R Rigor Mortis Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 2,757	Prose __________________ Rod: Let’s get out of 'ere Bill, there’s six Stoke fans staring right at us. Bill: Right, which one's staring at me. Rod: The one with the burberry cap on. Please don't start Bill. Bill: Right see you you cunt, I'll cut you first. shit piss fuck cunt cocksucker motherfucker and tits.

September 23rd, 2009, 12:15 AM	#6 (permalink)
p4irs Freakin' Noob Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: ho ho ho Posts: 3,121	are you a widow? __________________ Will you bite the hand that feeds? Will you chew until it bleeds? - Nine Inch Nails

September 23rd, 2009, 12:19 AM	#7 (permalink)
C_R Rigor Mortis Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 2,757	No I am not. __________________ Rod: Let’s get out of 'ere Bill, there’s six Stoke fans staring right at us. Bill: Right, which one's staring at me. Rod: The one with the burberry cap on. Please don't start Bill. Bill: Right see you you cunt, I'll cut you first. shit piss fuck cunt cocksucker motherfucker and tits.

September 23rd, 2009, 08:44 AM	#8 (permalink)
foofur Post Whore Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 1,344	i like __________________ Jazzie Marie July 2004- August 22, 2009

September 23rd, 2009, 09:48 PM	#9 (permalink)
ec_nana U . R . V Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 3,559	Me too. __________________ Rage becomes truly horrifying when everyone has forgotten how the poison got into their system and no one knows, or cares, how to get it out. We, humans, are nothing but flies to the Gods who played us for their sport.

September 26th, 2009, 10:41 PM	#10 (permalink)
Sonya Old School S&N Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 1,463	I like it too. __________________ . . [EATTHEDEAD] Sonya IMHO you are just sick.

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